MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/HWID_Activation.cmd

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if not defined key call :hwidfallback
 if defined altkey (set key=%altkey%&set changekey=1&set notworking=)
 
 if defined notworking if defined notfoundaltactID (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For HWID     [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Alternate Edition to Use for HWID     [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
 )
 
 if not defined key (
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ echo:
 )
 
 if defined winsub (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] detected. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription edition [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] detected. The script will activate the base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -502,9 +502,9 @@ if not "%name%"=="US" (
 set regionchange=1
 %psc% "Set-WinHomeLocation -GeoId 244" %nul%
 if !errorlevel! EQU 0 (
-echo Changing Windows Region To USA          [Successful]
+echo Changing the Windows Region to USA          [Successful]
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Changing Windows Region To USA          [Failed]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Changing the Windows Region to USA          [Failed]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ if not defined resfail (
 if defined resfail (
 set error=1
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Licensing Servers              [Failed to Connect]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Connecting to Licensing Servers              [Failed to Connect]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%licensing-servers-issue
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%licensing-servers-issue"
 )
@@ -657,11 +657,11 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Generating New IdentityCRL Registry     [Failed] [%_ident%
 
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate" /v DisableWindowsUpdateAccess %nul2% | find /i "0x1" %nul% && set wublock=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Policies\Microsoft\Windows\WindowsUpdate" /v DoNotConnectToWindowsUpdateInternetLocations %nul2% | find /i "0x1" %nul% && set wublock=1
-if defined wublock call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Update Blocker In Registry     [Found]"
+if defined wublock call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Windows Update Blocker in Registry     [Found]"
 
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Policies\Microsoft\WindowsStore" /v DisableStoreApps %nul2% | find /i "0x1" %nul% && (
 set storeblock=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Store Blocker In Registry      [Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Microsoft Store Blocker in Registry      [Found]"
 )
 
 for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath ObjectName Start Type ServiceSidType RequiredPrivileges FailureActions) do if not defined wucorrupt (
@@ -687,7 +687,7 @@ REM Check Internet related error codes
 
 if not defined wucorrupt if not defined wublock if not defined wuerror if not defined storeblock (
 echo "%error_code%" | findstr /i "0x80072e 0x80072f 0x800704cf 0x87e10bcf 0x800705b4" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Internet Issues                [Found] %error_code%"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Internet Issues                [Found] %error_code%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%licensing-servers-issue
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%licensing-servers-issue"
 )
@@ -720,9 +720,9 @@ echo:
 if defined regionchange (
 %psc% "Set-WinHomeLocation -GeoId %nation%" %nul%
 if !errorlevel! EQU 0 (
-echo Restoring Windows Region                [Successful]
+echo Restoring the Windows Region                [Successful]
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Restoring Windows Region                [Failed] [%name% - %nation%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Restoring the Windows Region                [Failed] [%name% - %nation%]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ exit /b
 
 :dk_reeval
 
-::  This key is left by the system in rearm process and sppsvc sometimes fails to delete it, it causes issues in working of the Scheduled Tasks of SPP
+::  This key is left by the system during the rearm process and sppsvc sometimes fails to delete it, it causes severe issues with SPP's scheduled tasks leading to random deactivations.
 
 set "ruleskey=HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\PersistedSystemState"
 reg delete "%ruleskey%" /v "State" /f %nul%
@@ -1072,7 +1072,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URL's are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1091,9 +1091,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 )
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
-if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
+if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1112,7 +1111,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1137,7 +1136,7 @@ if defined _corrupt (if defined serv_cor (set "serv_cor=!serv_cor! %%#") else (s
 if defined serv_cor (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Corrupt Services               [%serv_cor%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Corrupt Services               [%serv_cor%]"
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -1215,7 +1214,7 @@ set showfix=1
 if defined safeboot_option (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Boot Mode                      [%safeboot_option%] " %Blue% "[Safe mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Boot Mode                       [%safeboot_option%] " %Blue% "[Safe mode detected. Run the script in normal mode.]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1225,7 +1224,7 @@ set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Windows Setup State             [%imagestate%]"
 echo "%imagestate%" | find /i "RESEAL" %nul% && (
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running it in Audit Mode."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run the script in normal mode if you are running the script in Audit Mode."
 )
 )
 
@@ -1233,7 +1232,7 @@ call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\WinPE" /v InstRoot %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking WinPE                          " %Blue% "[WinPE mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for WinPE mode                  " %Blue% "[WinPE mode detected. Run the script in normal mode.]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1243,7 +1242,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for WPA Registry Errors         [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count         [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1252,7 +1251,7 @@ echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 if not defined officeact if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*EvalEdition~*.mum" (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Packages                  [Non-Eval Licenses are installed in Eval Windows]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Evaluation Packages         [Non-Evaluation Licenses are installed in Evaluation Windows]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%evaluation_editions
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%evaluation_editions"
 )
@@ -1271,18 +1270,18 @@ if "%osSKU%"=="165" set osedition=ProfessionalEducationN
 
 if not defined officeact (
 if %osedition%==0 (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Edition Name                   [Not Found In Registry]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Edition Name                [Not Found In Registry]"
 ) else (
 
 if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\%osedition%\%osedition%*.xrm-ms" if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\Security-SPP-Component-SKU-%osedition%\*-%osedition%-*.xrm-ms" (
 set error=1
 set skunotfound=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for License Files               [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Package Files               [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1331,14 +1330,14 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SLC/WMI SKU                    [Difference Found
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\PersistedTSReArmed" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Rearm                          " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for Rearm                      " %Blue% "[System Restart is Required]"
 )
 
 
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\ClipSVC\Volatile\PersistedSystemState" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking ClipSVC                        " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for ClipSVC Volatile Key       " %Blue% "[System Restart is Required]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1346,7 +1345,7 @@ call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking ClipSVC                        " %Blue% "[System
 
 if exist "%SysPath%\wlms\wlms.exe" (
 sc query wlms | find /i "RUNNING" %nul% && (
-echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
+echo Checking for Evaluation WLMS Service                      [Found]
 )
 )
 
@@ -1363,20 +1362,20 @@ for %%# in (SppEx%w%tComObj.exe sppsvc.exe) do (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\Ima%w%ge File Execu%w%tion Options\%%#" %nul% && (if defined _sppint (set "_sppint=!_sppint!, %%#") else (set "_sppint=%%#"))
 )
 if defined _sppint (
-echo Checking SPP Interference In IFEO       [%_sppint%]
+echo Checking for SPP Interference In IFEO                     [%_sppint%]
 )
 
 
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" %nul6%') do if /i %%b NEQ 0x0 (
 reg add "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" /t REG_DWORD /d "0" /f %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SkipRearm                      [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing To 0]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SkipRearm Registry Key       [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing to 0]"
 %psc% "Start-Job { Stop-Service sppsvc -force } | Wait-Job -Timeout 10 | Out-Null"
 set error=1
 )
 
 
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SPP Registry Key             [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
@@ -1408,9 +1407,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for SPP Token Folder            [Not Found, Creating Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SPP Token Folder            [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1428,14 +1427,14 @@ if not defined allapps (
 set "_notfoundids=Not found"
 )
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Activation IDs                 [!_notfoundids!]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Activation IDs                 [!_notfoundids!]"
 )
 )
 
 
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" if not exist "%tokenstore%\tokens.dat" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP tokens.dat                 [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SPP tokens.dat                 [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1449,7 +1448,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SvcRestartTask Status          [!taskinfo!]"
 )
 
 
-::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. It's often caused by gaming spoofers.
+::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. It's often caused by HWID spoofers.
 
 set permerror=
 if %winbuild% GEQ 9200 (
@@ -1592,7 +1591,7 @@ if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/KMS38_Activation.cmd

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ goto dk_done
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special character limitations in path name
+::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -556,7 +556,7 @@ if %_wmic% EQU 1 for /f "tokens=2 delims==" %%a in ('"wmic path %spp% where (App
 if %_wmic% EQU 0 for /f "tokens=2 delims==" %%a in ('%psc% "(([WMISEARCHER]'SELECT ID FROM %spp% WHERE ApplicationID=''55c92734-d682-4d71-983e-d6ec3f16059f'' AND Description like ''%%KMSCLIENT%%'' AND PartialProductKey IS NOT NULL AND LicenseDependsOn is NULL').Get()).ID | %% {echo ('ID='+$_)}" %nul6%') do call set "app=%%a"
 
 if not defined app (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed GVLK Activation ID   [Not Found] Aborting..."
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Installed GVLK Activation ID   [Not Found] Aborting..."
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 goto :dk_done
@@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ set "sessionId=TwBTAE0AYQBqAG8AcgBWAGUAcgBzAGkAbwBuAD0ANQA7AE8AUwBNAGkAbgBvAHIAV
 copy /y /b "%tdir%\GenuineTicket" "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" %nul%
 
 if not exist "%tdir%\GenuineTicket.xml" (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Generating GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed, aborting the process]"
 if exist "%tdir%\Genuine*" del /f /q "%tdir%\Genuine*" %nul%
 goto :k_final
 ) else (
@@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "Stopping sppsvc Service                 [Failed]"
 %_xmlexist% (
 set error=1
 if exist "%tdir%\*.xml" del /f /q "%tdir%\*.xml" %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed with ClipSVC service restart, wait...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed With ClipSVC Service Restart, Wait...]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Installing GenuineTicket.xml            [Failed With clipu
 if exist "%ProgramData%\Microsoft\Windows\ClipSVC\Install\Migration\*.xml" (
 set error=1
 set rebuildinfo=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Ticket Migration               [Failed]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Ticket Migration           [Failed]"
 )
 
 if not defined showfix if defined rebuildinfo (
@@ -798,9 +798,9 @@ title  Remove KMS38 Protection %masver%
 
 echo:
 %nul% reg query "HKLM\%specific_kms%" && (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Removing Specific KMS Host              [Failed]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Removing the Specific KMS Host          [Failed]"
 ) || (
-echo Removing Specific KMS Host              [Successful]
+echo Removing the Specific KMS Host          [Successful]
 )
 
 goto :dk_done
@@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1224,7 +1224,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -1234,9 +1234,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 )
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
-if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
+if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for PUP Activators                [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1255,7 +1254,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Sandboxing                 [Found, the script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1280,7 +1279,7 @@ if defined _corrupt (if defined serv_cor (set "serv_cor=!serv_cor! %%#") else (s
 if defined serv_cor (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Corrupt Services               [%serv_cor%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Corrupt Services           [%serv_cor%]"
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -1346,7 +1345,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -1368,7 +1367,7 @@ set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Windows Setup State            [%imagestate%]"
 echo "%imagestate%" | find /i "RESEAL" %nul% && (
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running it in Audit Mode."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running the script in Audit Mode."
 )
 )
 
@@ -1376,7 +1375,7 @@ call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\WinPE" /v InstRoot %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking WinPE                          " %Blue% "[WinPE mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for WinPE mode               " %Blue% "[WinPE mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1386,7 +1385,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for WPA Registry Errors        [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1395,7 +1394,7 @@ echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 if not defined officeact if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*EvalEdition~*.mum" (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Packages                  [Non-Eval Licenses are installed in Eval Windows]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Evaluation Packages        [Non-Evaluation Licenses are installed in Evaluation Windows]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%evaluation_editions
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%evaluation_editions"
 )
@@ -1414,18 +1413,18 @@ if "%osSKU%"=="165" set osedition=ProfessionalEducationN
 
 if not defined officeact (
 if %osedition%==0 (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Edition Name                   [Not Found In Registry]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Edition Name               [Not Found in Registry]"
 ) else (
 
 if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\%osedition%\%osedition%*.xrm-ms" if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\Security-SPP-Component-SKU-%osedition%\*-%osedition%-*.xrm-ms" (
 set error=1
 set skunotfound=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for License Files              [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Package Files              [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1474,7 +1473,7 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SLC/WMI SKU                    [Difference Found
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\PersistedTSReArmed" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Rearm                          " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for Rearm                      " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1489,7 +1488,7 @@ call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking ClipSVC                        " %Blue% "[System
 
 if exist "%SysPath%\wlms\wlms.exe" (
 sc query wlms | find /i "RUNNING" %nul% && (
-echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
+echo Checking for Evaluation WLMS Service    [Found]
 )
 )
 
@@ -1506,13 +1505,13 @@ for %%# in (SppEx%w%tComObj.exe sppsvc.exe) do (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\Ima%w%ge File Execu%w%tion Options\%%#" %nul% && (if defined _sppint (set "_sppint=!_sppint!, %%#") else (set "_sppint=%%#"))
 )
 if defined _sppint (
-echo Checking SPP Interference In IFEO       [%_sppint%]
+echo Checking for SPP Interference in IFEO   [%_sppint%]
 )
 
 
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" %nul6%') do if /i %%b NEQ 0x0 (
 reg add "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" /t REG_DWORD /d "0" /f %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SkipRearm                      [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing To 0]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SkipRearm                      [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing to 0]"
 %psc% "Start-Job { Stop-Service sppsvc -force } | Wait-Job -Timeout 10 | Out-Null"
 set error=1
 )
@@ -1521,7 +1520,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1551,9 +1550,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1578,7 +1577,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Activation IDs                 [!_notfoundids!]"
 
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" if not exist "%tokenstore%\tokens.dat" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP tokens.dat                 [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SPP tokens.dat             [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1671,7 +1670,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -1682,7 +1681,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -1690,7 +1689,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt"
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -1729,13 +1728,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Ohook_Activation_AIO.cmd

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ goto dk_done
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special character limitations in path name
+::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ if %winbuild% GEQ 10240 %psc% "Get-AppxPackage -name "Microsoft.Office.Desktop""
 
 if not "%o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%"=="" (
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Unsupported Office Install     [ %o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Unsupported Office Installs  [%o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%]"
 )
 
 if %winbuild% GEQ 10240 %psc% "Get-AppxPackage -name "Microsoft.MicrosoftOfficeHub"" | find /i "Office" %nul1% && (
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ sc query ClickToRunSvc %nul%
 set error1=%errorlevel%
 
 if defined o16c2r if %error1% EQU 1060 (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking ClickToRun Service             [Not found, Office 16.0 files found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for ClickToRun Service         [Not found, Office 16.0 files found]"
 set o16c2r=
 set error=1
 )
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ sc query OfficeSvc %nul%
 set error2=%errorlevel%
 
 if defined o15c2r if %error1% EQU 1060 if %error2% EQU 1060 (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking ClickToRun Service             [Not found, Office 15.0 files found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for ClickToRun Service         [Not found, Office 15.0 files found]"
 set o15c2r=
 set error=1
 )
@@ -449,9 +449,9 @@ if "%o16c2r%%o15c2r%%o16msi%%o15msi%"=="" (
 set error=1
 echo:
 if not "%o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%"=="" (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Supported Office Install       [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Supported Office Installs  [Not Found]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Office               [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Installed Office           [Not Found]"
 )
 
 if defined ohub (
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if not "%o16c2r%%o15c2r%%o16msi%%o15msi%"=="1" set multioffice=1
 if not "%o14msi%%o14c2r%%o16uwp%"=="" set multioffice=1
 
 if defined multioffice (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Multiple Office Install        [Found, its recommended to install only one version]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for Multiple Office Installs  [Found, it's recommended to install only one version]"
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ echo:
 echo Activating Office...                    [C2R ^| %_version% ^| %_oArch%]
 
 if not defined _oIds (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Products             [Product IDs not found. Aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Installed Products' ID's             [Product IDs not found, aborting...]"
 set error=1
 goto :starto16c2r
 )
@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ echo:
 echo Activating Office...                    [C2R ^| %_version% %_AudienceData%^| %_oArch%]
 
 if not defined _oIds (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Products             [Product IDs not found. Aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Installed Products' ID's             [Product IDs not found, aborting...]"
 set error=1
 goto :startmsi
 )
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ call :oh_hookinstall
 
 if defined _sublic (
 if not exist "%_oLPath%\Word2019VL_KMS_Client_AE*.xrm-ms" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Old Office With Sub License    [Found. Update Office, otherwise, it may show a licensing issue-related banner.]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for Old Office With Sub License          [Found, Update Office otherwise it may show a licensing issue-related banner.]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ reg add "%kmskey%" /f /v KeyManagementServiceName /t REG_SZ /d "10.0.0.10" /reg:
 )
 reg delete "%kmskey%" /f %nul%
 reg add "%kmskey%" /f /v KeyManagementServiceName /t REG_SZ /d "10.0.0.10" %nul%
-echo Adding a Registry to Prevent Banner     [Successful]
+echo Adding a Registry Key to Prevent Banner          [Successful]
 )
 )
 
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ call :oh_licrefresh
 echo:
 if not defined error (
 call :dk_color %Green% "Office is permanently activated."
-if defined ohub call :dk_color %Gray% "Office apps such as Word, Excel are activated, use them directly. Ignore 'Buy' button in Office dashboard app."
+if defined ohub call :dk_color %Gray% "Office apps such as Word, Excel are activated. Search for them and use them directly. Ignore the 'Buy' button in the Office dashboard app."
 echo Help: %mas%troubleshoot
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Some errors were detected."
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ exit /b
 :oh_fixprids
 
 if not defined _prids (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking ProductReleaseIds In Registry  [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for ProductReleaseIds Registry     [Not Found]"
 exit /b
 )
 
@@ -919,7 +919,7 @@ if not exist "%_hookPath%\sppc.dll" (if not defined ierror set ierror=Copy)
 
 echo:
 if not defined ierror (
-echo Symlinking System's sppc.dll to         ["%_hookPath%\sppcs.dll"] [Successful]
+echo Symlinking System sppc.dll to        ["%_hookPath%\sppcs.dll"] [Successful]
 if defined exhook (
 echo Copying Custom %_hook% to            ["%_hookPath%\sppc.dll"] [Successful]
 ) else (
@@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ echo "!allapps!" | find /i "!_actid!" %nul1% || call :oh_installlic
 call :dk_inskey "[!key!] [!_prod!] [!_lic!]"
 ) else (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Product In Script              [Office %oVer%.0 !_prod! not found in script]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for the Product in the Script              [Office %oVer%.0 !_prod! Not Found]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Make sure you are using the latest version of MAS."
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "%mas%"
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@ if defined winserver if defined _config (
 echo %_oIds% | find /i "Retail" %nul1% && (
 set scaIsNeeded=1
 reg add %_config% /v SharedComputerLicensing /t REG_SZ /d "1" /f %nul1%
-echo Adding SharedComputerLicensing Reg      [Successful] [Needed on Server With Retail Office]"
+echo Adding SharedComputerLicensing Registry [Successful] [Needed on Windows Server With Retail Office]"
 )
 )
 
@@ -1043,13 +1043,13 @@ echo Activating Office...                    [MSI ^| %_version% ^| %_oArch%]
 
 if not defined _oBranding (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking BRANDING.XML                   [Not Found, aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for BRANDING.XML               [Not Found, aborting...]"
 exit /b
 )
 
 if not defined _oIds (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Installed Products             [Product IDs not found, aborting activation...]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Installed Product ID's     [Product IDs not found, aborting...]"
 exit /b
 )
 
@@ -1110,7 +1110,7 @@ for /f "tokens=* delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$p = 'HKLM:\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows
 
 if not defined _sidlist (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking User Accounts SID              [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for User Account SID's             [Not Found]"
 exit /b
 )
 
@@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@ set /a counter=0
 for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do set /a counter+=1
 
 if %counter% GTR 10 (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Total User Accounts            [%counter%]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking Total User Account Count         [%counter%]"
 )
 
 ::==========================
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ echo Installing Generic Product Key          %~1 [Successful]
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Installing Generic Product Key          %~1 [Failed] %keyerror%"
 if not defined error (
-if defined altapplist call :dk_color %Red% "Activation ID not found for this key."
+if defined altapplist call :dk_color %Red% "No Activation ID was found for this key."
 call :dk_color %Blue% "%_fixmsg%"
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1524,7 +1524,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -1543,9 +1543,8 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 )
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
-if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
+if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking for PUP Activators             [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -1564,7 +1563,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Sandboxing                 [Found, the script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -1589,7 +1588,7 @@ if defined _corrupt (if defined serv_cor (set "serv_cor=!serv_cor! %%#") else (s
 if defined serv_cor (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Corrupt Services               [%serv_cor%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Corrupt Services           [%serv_cor%]"
 )
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
@@ -1667,7 +1666,7 @@ set showfix=1
 if defined safeboot_option (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Boot Mode                      [%safeboot_option%] " %Blue% "[Safe mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Boot Mode                      [%safeboot_option%] " %Blue% "[Safe mode detected, run in normal mode.]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1677,7 +1676,7 @@ set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Windows Setup State            [%imagestate%]"
 echo "%imagestate%" | find /i "RESEAL" %nul% && (
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running it in Audit Mode."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run the script in normal mode in case you are running it in Audit Mode."
 )
 )
 
@@ -1685,7 +1684,7 @@ call :dk_color %Blue% "You need to run it in normal mode in case you are running
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\WinPE" /v InstRoot %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking WinPE                          " %Blue% "[WinPE mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for WinPE Mode                 " %Blue% "[WinPE mode found. Run in normal mode.]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1695,7 +1694,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for WPA Registry Errors        [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -1704,7 +1703,7 @@ echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 if not defined officeact if exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*EvalEdition~*.mum" (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" /v EditionID %nul2% | find /i "Eval" %nul1% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Eval Packages                  [Non-Eval Licenses are installed in Eval Windows]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Evaluation Packages        [Non-Evaluation Licenses are installed in Evaluation Windows]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%evaluation_editions
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%evaluation_editions"
 )
@@ -1723,18 +1722,18 @@ if "%osSKU%"=="165" set osedition=ProfessionalEducationN
 
 if not defined officeact (
 if %osedition%==0 (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Edition Name                   [Not Found In Registry]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Edition Name               [Not Found in Registry]"
 ) else (
 
 if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\%osedition%\%osedition%*.xrm-ms" if not exist "%SysPath%\spp\tokens\skus\Security-SPP-Component-SKU-%osedition%\*-%osedition%-*.xrm-ms" (
 set error=1
 set skunotfound=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for License Files              [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for Package Files              [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1783,14 +1782,14 @@ call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SLC/WMI SKU                    [Difference Found
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\PersistedTSReArmed" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking Rearm                          " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for Rearm                      " %Blue% "[System Restart is Required]"
 )
 
 
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\ClipSVC\Volatile\PersistedSystemState" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking ClipSVC                        " %Blue% "[System Restart Is Required]"
+call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking for Volatile ClipSVC Key       " %Blue% "[System Restart is Required]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1798,14 +1797,14 @@ call :dk_color2 %Red% "Checking ClipSVC                        " %Blue% "[System
 
 if exist "%SysPath%\wlms\wlms.exe" (
 sc query wlms | find /i "RUNNING" %nul% && (
-echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
+echo Checking for Evaluation WLMS Service    [Found]
 )
 )
 
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry      [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -1815,13 +1814,13 @@ for %%# in (SppEx%w%tComObj.exe sppsvc.exe) do (
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\Ima%w%ge File Execu%w%tion Options\%%#" %nul% && (if defined _sppint (set "_sppint=!_sppint!, %%#") else (set "_sppint=%%#"))
 )
 if defined _sppint (
-echo Checking SPP Interference In IFEO       [%_sppint%]
+echo Checking for SPP Interference in IFEO   [%_sppint%]
 )
 
 
 for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" %nul6%') do if /i %%b NEQ 0x0 (
 reg add "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform" /v "SkipRearm" /t REG_DWORD /d "0" /f %nul%
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SkipRearm                      [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing To 0]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SkipRearm                  [Default 0 Value Not Found. Changing To 0]"
 %psc% "Start-Job { Stop-Service sppsvc -force } | Wait-Job -Timeout 10 | Out-Null"
 set error=1
 )
@@ -1830,7 +1829,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By HWID Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -1860,7 +1859,7 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Creating Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
@@ -1880,14 +1879,14 @@ if not defined allapps (
 set "_notfoundids=Not found"
 )
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Activation IDs                 [!_notfoundids!]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Activation ID's                [!_notfoundids!]"
 )
 )
 
 
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" if not exist "%tokenstore%\tokens.dat" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP tokens.dat                 [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking for SPP tokens.dat             [Not Found] [%tokenstore%\]"
 )
 
 
@@ -1980,7 +1979,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -1991,7 +1990,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -1999,7 +1998,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt"
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -2038,13 +2037,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Activators/Online_KMS_Activation.cmd

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ set "_debug=0"
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Set environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
+::  Set Environment variables, it helps if they are misconfigured in the system
 
 setlocal EnableExtensions
 setlocal DisableDelayedExpansion
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo the Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ goto dk_done
 
 ::========================================================================================================================================
 
-::  Fix special character limitations in path name
+::  Fix special characters limitation in path name
 
 set "_work=%~dp0"
 if "%_work:~-1%"=="\" set "_work=%_work:~0,-1%"
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows must be updated to build 19044.2788 or higher for
 )
 
 if not defined key if defined notfoundaltactID (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition For %KS%      [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Alternate Edition for %KS%      [%altedition% Activation ID Not Found]"
 )
 
 if not defined key if not defined _gvlk (
@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ echo:
 )
 
 if defined winsub (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. Script will activate base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Windows Subscription [SKU ID-%slcSKU%] found. The script will activate the base edition [SKU ID-%regSKU%]."
 echo:
 )
 
@@ -1291,7 +1291,7 @@ reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwarePr
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\0ff1ce15-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 reg delete "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\OfficeSoftwareProtectionPlatform\Policies\59a52881-a989-479d-af46-f275c6370663" /f %nul%
 
-echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully cleared from all %counter% user accounts]
+echo Clearing Office License Blocks          [Successfully Cleared From All %counter% Useraccounts]
 
 ::==========================
 
@@ -1309,7 +1309,7 @@ for %%# in (%_sidlist%) do (
 reg delete HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /f %nul%
 reg add HKU\%%#\Software\Microsoft\Office\16.0\Common\Licensing\Resiliency /v "TimeOfLastHeartbeatFailure" /t REG_SZ /d "2040-01-01T00:00:00Z" /f %nul%
 )
-echo Adding Reg Keys to Skip License Check   [Successfully added to all %counter% ^& future new user accounts]
+echo Adding Reg Keys To Skip License Check   [Successfully Added To All %counter% ^& Future New Useraccounts]
 )
 
 ::==========================
@@ -1323,14 +1323,14 @@ reg query HKU\%%# %nul% && set failedtounload=1
 
 if defined failedtoload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded Accounts Registry      [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Loading Unloaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
 )
 
 if defined failedtounload (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading Loaded Account Registries     [Failed for some user accounts]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Unloading loaded accounts Registry      [Failed For Some Useraccounts]"
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system and try again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system and try again."
 )
 
 exit /b
@@ -2573,7 +2573,7 @@ set pupfound=%pupfound1%%pupfound2%
 set hcount=0
 for %%# in (avira.com kaspersky.com virustotal.com mcafee.com) do (
 find /i "%%#" %SysPath%\drivers\etc\hosts %nul% && set /a hcount+=1)
-if %hcount%==4 set "results=[Antivirus URLs are blocked in hosts]"
+if %hcount%==4 set "results=[AV URLs are blocked in hosts]"
 
 set wucount=0
 for %%# in (wuauserv) do (
@@ -2582,7 +2582,7 @@ for %%G in (DependOnService Description DisplayName ErrorControl ImagePath Objec
 reg query HKLM\SYSTEM\CurrentControlSet\Services\%%# /v %%G %nul% || (set _corrupt=1 & set /a wucount+=1)
 )
 )
-if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[Windows Update registry is corrupt]"
+if %wucount% GEQ 1 set "results=%results%[WU registry is corrupt]"
 
 sc start sppsvc %nul%
 echo "%errorlevel%" | findstr "577 225" %nul% && (
@@ -2593,8 +2593,7 @@ if not exist %SysPath%\sppsvc.exe if not exist %SysPath%\alg.exe (set "results=%
 
 if not "%results%%pupfound%"=="" (
 if defined pupfound call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking PUP Activators                 [Found%pupfound%]"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection..."
+if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Probable Mal%w%ware Infection     %results%"
-if defined results call :dk_color %Red% "%results%"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%remove_mal%w%ware
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%remove_mal%w%ware"
 echo:
@@ -2613,7 +2612,7 @@ call :dk_chkmal
 sc query Null %nul% || (
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found, script may not work properly.]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Sandboxing                     [Found. Script may not work properly.]"
 call :dk_color %Blue% "If you are using any third-party antivirus, check if it is blocking the script."
 echo:
 )
@@ -2704,7 +2703,7 @@ if defined serv_e (
 set error=1
 call :dk_color %Red% "Starting Services                       [Failed] [%serv_e%]"
 echo %serv_e% | findstr /i "ClipSVC-1058 sppsvc-1058" %nul% && (
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart your system to fix this error."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "Restart the system to fix this error."
 set showfix=1
 )
 )
@@ -2744,7 +2743,7 @@ for /f "delims=" %%a in ('%psc% "$f=[io.file]::ReadAllText('!_batp!') -split ':w
 echo "%wpainfo%" | find /i "Error Found" %nul% && (
 set error=1
 set wpaerror=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Errors            [%wpainfo%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking WPA Registry Error             [%wpainfo%]"
 ) || (
 echo Checking WPA Registry Count             [%wpainfo%]
 )
@@ -2783,7 +2782,7 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "Checking License Files                  [Not Found] [%osed
 
 if not exist "%SystemRoot%\Servicing\Packages\Microsoft-Windows-*-%osedition%-*.mum" (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package Files                  [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking Package File                   [Not Found] [%osedition%]"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -2854,7 +2853,7 @@ echo Checking Eval WLMS Service              [Found]
 
 reg query "HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion" %nul% || (
 set error=1
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Registry          [Not Found]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking HKU\S-1-5-20 Reg               [Not Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 )
@@ -2879,7 +2878,7 @@ set error=1
 reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform\Plugins\Objects\msft:rm/algorithm/hwid/4.0" /f ba02fed39662 /d %nul% || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Registry Key               [Incorrect ModuleId Found]"
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Most likely caused by HWID spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Possibly Caused By Gaming Spoofers. Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%issues_due_to_gaming_spoofers"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -2909,9 +2908,9 @@ set "d=!d! $AclObject.SetSecurityDescriptorSddlForm($sddl);"
 set "d=!d! Set-Acl -Path %tokenstore% -AclObject $AclObject;"
 %psc% "!d!" %nul%
 if exist "%tokenstore%\" (
-call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Gray% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Created Now] [%tokenstore%\]"
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found, Failed to Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Checking SPP Token Folder               [Not Found. Failed To Create] [%tokenstore%\]"
 set error=1
 set showfix=1
 )
@@ -3029,7 +3028,7 @@ if ($osVersion.Build -ge $minBuildNumber) {
     }
     for ($i=1; $i -le $count; $i++) {
         if (-not $subkeyHashTable.ContainsKey("$i")) {
-            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found - $i key does not exist."
+            Write-Output "Total Keys $count. Error Found- $i key does not exist"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
         }
@@ -3040,7 +3039,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
         if ($PSVersionTable.PSVersion.Major -lt 3) {
             cmd /c "reg query "HKLM\SYSTEM\WPA\$_" /ve /t REG_BINARY >nul 2>&1"
 			if ($LASTEXITCODE -ne 0) {
-            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+            Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
 			$wpaKey.Close()
 			exit
 			}
@@ -3048,7 +3047,7 @@ $wpaKey.GetSubKeyNames() | ForEach-Object {
             $subkey = $wpaKey.OpenSubKey($_)
             $p = $subkey.GetValueNames()
             if (($p | Where-Object { $subkey.GetValueKind($_) -eq [Microsoft.Win32.RegistryValueKind]::Binary }).Count -eq 0) {
-                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found - Binary Data is corrupt."
+                Write-Host "Total Keys $count. Error Found- Binary Data is corrupt"
 				$wpaKey.Close()
 				exit
             }
@@ -3087,13 +3086,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] To Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] To Ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press 0 key to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Change_Edition.cmd

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - The script either has an LF line ending issue or the empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ set "line=echo _________________________________________________________________
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
+echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo Script is launched from the temp folder.
 echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
 ) || (
-echo PowerShell is not working. Aborting...
+echo PowerShell is not working, aborting...
 echo If you have applied restrictions on Powershell then undo those changes.
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%fix_powershell
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ dism.exe
 ) do (
 if not exist %SysPath%\%%# (
 %eline%
-echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing, aborting...
+echo [%SysPath%\%%#] file is missing. Aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ if defined UBR (set "fullbuild=%%G.!UBR!") else (set "fullbuild=%%G.%%H")
 call :dk_actid 55c92734-d682-4d71-983e-d6ec3f16059f
 if not defined apps (
 %eline%
-echo Either key is not insalled or script failed to get installed key's activation ID. Aborting...
+echo Either a key is not installed or MAS failed to get installed keys' activation ID, aborting...
 echo:
 set fixes=%fixes% %mas%troubleshoot
 call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Help - " %_Yellow% " %mas%troubleshoot"
@@ -423,9 +423,9 @@ echo %%# | findstr /i "CountrySpecific CloudEdition" %nul% || (set "_ntarget=!_n
 if not defined _ntarget (
 %line%
 echo:
-if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %Red% "DISM.exe is not working."
+if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %Red% "DISM is not working."
 call :dk_color %Gray% "Target editions not found."
-echo Current Edition [%osedition% ^| %winbuild%] can not be changed to any other Edition.
+echo Current edition [%osedition% ^| %winbuild%] cannot be changed.
 %line%
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -443,11 +443,11 @@ set targetedition=
 
 %line%
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Gray% "You can change the edition [%osedition%] [%fullbuild%] to one of the following."
+call :dk_color %Gray% "You can change the current edition [%osedition%] [%fullbuild%] to one of the following:"
 %showeditionerror%
 if defined dismnotworking (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM is not working."
-if /i "%osedition:~0,4%"=="Core" call :dk_color %_Yellow% "     - You will see more edition options to choose once its changed to Pro."
+if /i "%osedition:~0,4%"=="Core" call :dk_color %_Yellow% "     - You will see more editions to choose from once you've changed to Professional."
 )
 %line%
 echo:
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@ cls
 %line%
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
-if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "DISM.exe is not working."
+if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "DISM is not working."
 echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
 
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ if defined rebootreq goto dk_done
 
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
-if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
+if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM is not working."
 echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
 call :dk_color %Blue% "Important - Save your work before continuing, the system will auto-restart."
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ if defined rebootreq goto dk_done
 cls
 echo:
 %showeditionerror%
-if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM.exe is not working."
+if defined dismnotworking call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Note - DISM is not working."
 echo Changing the current edition [%osedition%] %fullbuild% to [%targetedition%]...
 echo:
 
@@ -987,13 +987,13 @@ echo:
 if %_unattended%==1 timeout /t 2 & exit /b
 
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to open troubleshoot page " %Gray% " Press [0] to ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Extract_OEM_Folder.cmd

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - Script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ call :dk_setvar
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
+echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto done2
 )
 
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo Script is launched from the temp folder.
 echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ goto done2
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs administrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto done2
 )
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@ cd \
 :errorfound
 
 %eline%
-echo The script failed to create the $OEM$ folder.
+echo The script failed to create the $OEM$ folder successfully.
 goto :done2
 
 :done
@@ -689,11 +689,11 @@ goto :done2
 echo ______________________________________________________________
 echo:
 call :dk_color %Blue% "%oem%"
-call :dk_color %Green% "$OEM$ folder was successfully created on your Desktop."
+call :dk_color %Green% "The $OEM$ folder was successfully created on your Desktop."
 echo "%oem%" | find /i "38" %nul% && (
 echo:
-echo To KMS38 activate Server Cor/Acor editions ^(No GUI Versions^),
+echo If you want to activate Server Cor/Acor editions ^(No GUI Versions^) using KMS38,
-echo Check this page %mas%oem-folder
+echo refer to this page for instructions: %mas%oem-folder
 )
 echo ______________________________________________________________
 
@@ -701,13 +701,13 @@ echo ______________________________________________________________
 
 echo:
 if defined fixes (
-call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to Open Troubleshoot Page " %Gray% " Press [0] to Ignore"
+call :dk_color2 %Blue% "Press [1] to open the Troubleshoot page " %Gray% " Press [0] to ignore"
 choice /C:10 /N
 if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."

MAS/Separate-Files-Version/Troubleshoot.cmd

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ set "mas=ht%blank%tps%blank%://mass%blank%grave.dev/"
 sc query Null | find /i "RUNNING"
 if %errorlevel% NEQ 0 (
 echo:
-echo Null service is not running, script may crash...
+echo The Null service, which is required for the script to operate, is not running.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ cls
 pushd "%~dp0"
 >nul findstr /v "$" "%~nx0" && (
 echo:
-echo Error - Script either has LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
+echo Error - Script either has an LF line ending issue or an empty line at the end of the script is missing.
 echo:
 echo:
 echo Help - %mas%troubleshoot
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ set "line=______________________________________________________________________
 if %winbuild% LSS 7600 (
 %nceline%
 echo Unsupported OS version detected [%winbuild%].
-echo Project is supported only for Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
+echo MAS only supports Windows 7/8/8.1/10/11 and their Server equivalents.
 goto dk_done
 )
 
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ setlocal EnableDelayedExpansion
 echo "!_batf!" | find /i "!_ttemp!" %nul1% && (
 if /i not "!_work!"=="!_ttemp!" (
 %eline%
-echo The script was launched from the temp folder.
+echo Script is launched from the temp folder,
 echo You are most likely running the script directly from the archive file.
 echo:
 echo Extract the archive file and launch the script from the extracted folder.
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ goto dk_done
 %nul1% fltmc || (
 if not defined _elev %psc% "start cmd.exe -arg '/c \"!_PSarg!\"' -verb runas" && exit /b
 %eline%
-echo This script needs admin rights.
+echo This script needs admininistrator rights.
 echo Right click on this script and select 'Run as administrator'.
 goto dk_done
 )
@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ copy /y /b "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\backup_cbs_%_t
 del /f /q "%SystemRoot%\logs\cbs\cbs.log" %nul%
 
 echo:
-echo Applying the command...
+echo Applying the command,..
 echo sfc /scannow
 sfc /scannow
 
@@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ echo %line%
 echo:   
 echo      Notes:
 echo:
-echo       - This option helps in troubleshooting activation issues.
+echo       - This option helps in troubleshooting generic activation issues.
 echo:
 echo       - This option will:
 echo            - Deactivate Windows and Office, you may need to reactivate.
@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 ::   Clear HWID token related registry to fix activation incase there is any corruption
 
 echo:
-echo Deleting IdentityCRL Registry Key...
+echo Deleting IdentityCRL...
 echo [%_ident%]
 reg delete "%_ident%" /f %nul%
 reg query "%_ident%" %nul% && (
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ echo:
 call :scandat check
 
 if not defined token (
-call :dk_color %Red% "tokens.dat file not found."
+call :dk_color %Red% "tokens.dat file was not found."
 ) else (
 echo tokens.dat file: [%token%]
 )
@@ -620,14 +620,14 @@ for /f "skip=2 tokens=2*" %%a in ('reg query "HKLM\SOFTWARE\Microsoft\Windows NT
 if %winbuild% GEQ 9200 if /i not "%tokenstore%"=="%SysPath%\spp\store" if /i not "%tokenstore%"=="%SysPath%\spp\store\2.0" if /i not "%tokenstore%"=="%SysPath%\spp\store_test\2.0" (
 set badregistry=1
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Red% "Correct path not found in TokenStore Registry [%tokenstore%]"
+call :dk_color %Red% "Correct path was not found in the TokenStore registry. [%tokenstore%]"
 )
 
 ::  Check sppsvc permissions and apply fixes
 
 if %winbuild% GEQ 9200 if not defined badregistry (
 echo:
-echo Checking SPP permission related issues...
+echo Checking for SPP permission related issues...
 call :checkperms
 if defined permerror (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[!permerror!]"
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ if %winbuild% LSS 9200 (
 REM Fix issues caused by Update KB971033 in Windows 7
 REM https://support.microsoft.com/help/4487266
 echo:
-echo Checking Update KB971033...
+echo Checking for update KB971033...
 %psc% "if (Get-Hotfix -Id KB971033 -ErrorAction SilentlyContinue) {Exit 3}" %nul%
 if !errorlevel!==3 (
 echo Found, uninstalling it...
@@ -726,13 +726,13 @@ goto :repairoffice
 call :scandatospp check
 
 if not defined token (
-call :dk_color %Red% "tokens.dat file not found."
+call :dk_color %Red% "tokens.dat file was not found."
 ) else (
 echo tokens.dat file: [%token%]
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Stopping osppsvc service...
+echo Stopping the osppsvc service...
 %psc% Stop-Service osppsvc -force %nul%
 
 echo:
@@ -746,7 +746,7 @@ echo:
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Starting osppsvc service to generate tokens.dat...
+echo Starting the osppsvc service to generate tokens.dat...
 %psc% Start-Service osppsvc %nul%
 call :scandatospp check
 if not defined token (
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ goto :at_back
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Checking WMI
+echo Checking WMI...
 call :checkwmi
 
 ::  Apply basic fix first and check
@@ -961,18 +961,18 @@ echo Winmgmt service is corrupted, aborting...
 goto :at_back
 )
 
-echo Disabling Winmgmt service
+echo Disabling Winmgmt service...
 sc config Winmgmt start= disabled %nul%
 if %errorlevel% EQU 0 (
 echo [Successful]
 ) else (
-call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed] Aborting..."
+call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed, aborting...]"
 sc config Winmgmt start= auto %nul%
 goto :at_back
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Stopping Winmgmt service
+echo Stopping Winmgmt service...
 %psc% Stop-Service Winmgmt -force %nul%
 %psc% Stop-Service Winmgmt -force %nul%
 %psc% Stop-Service Winmgmt -force %nul%
@@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 ) || (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed]"
 echo:
-call :dk_color %Blue% "Its recommended to select [Restart] option and then apply Fix WMI option again."
+call :dk_color %Blue% "It is recommended to select [Restart] option and then apply Fix WMI option again."
 echo %line%
 echo:
 choice /C:21 /N /M "> [1] Restart  [2] Revert Back Changes :"
@@ -993,7 +993,7 @@ exit
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Deleting WMI repository
+echo Deleting WMI repository...
 rmdir /s /q "%SysPath%\wbem\repository\" %nul%
 if exist "%SysPath%\wbem\repository\" (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed]"
@@ -1002,7 +1002,7 @@ echo [Successful]
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Enabling Winmgmt service
+echo Enabling Winmgmt service...
 sc config Winmgmt start= auto %nul%
 if %errorlevel% EQU 0 (
 echo [Successful]
@@ -1013,17 +1013,17 @@ call :dk_color %Red% "[Failed]"
 call :checkwmi
 if not defined error (
 echo:
-echo Checking WMI
+echo Checking WMI...
 call :dk_color %Green% "[Working]"
 goto :at_back
 )
 
 echo:
-echo Registering .dll's and Compiling .mof's, .mfl's
+echo Registering .dll's, compiling .mof's and .mfl's...
 call :registerobj %nul%
 
 echo:
-echo Checking WMI
+echo Checking WMI...
 call :checkwmi
 if defined error (
 call :dk_color %Red% "[Not Responding]"
@@ -1079,7 +1079,7 @@ echo:
 echo %line%
 echo:
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."
@@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@ exit /b
 
 :checkperms
 
-::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. Incorrect permissions are often set by gaming spoofers.
+::  This code checks if SPP has permission access to tokens folder and required registry keys. Incorrect permissions are often set by HWID gaming spoofers.
 
 set permerror=
 if not exist "%tokenstore%\" set "permerror=Error Found In Token Folder"
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ if !errorlevel!==2 (
 if "%%A"=="%tokenstore%" (
 set "permerror=Error Found In Token Folder"
 ) else (
-set "permerror=Error Found In SPP Registries"
+set "permerror=Error Found In SPP registries"
 )
 )
 )
@@ -1191,7 +1191,7 @@ if ($env:permerror -eq 'Error Found In SPP Registries') {
 # Fix perms for SPP in HKU\S-1-5-20
 # https://learn.microsoft.com/office/troubleshoot/activation/license-issue-when-start-office-application
 
-if ($env:permerror -ne 'Error Found In S-1-5-20 SPP') {
+if ($env:permerror -ne 'Error found in S-1-5-20 SPP') {
     exit
 }
 if (-not (Test-Path 'Registry::HKU\S-1-5-20\Software\Microsoft\Windows NT\CurrentVersion\SoftwareProtectionPlatform')) {
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ if !errorlevel!==1 (for %%# in (%fixes%) do (start %%#))
 )
 
 if defined terminal (
-call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] key to %_exitmsg%..."
+call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press [0] to %_exitmsg%..."
 choice /c 0 /n
 ) else (
 call :dk_color %_Yellow% "Press any key to %_exitmsg%..."